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09 July 2009 @ 10:45 pm
The Return  
Still suck at horror…  >.>  This is ‘sort of’ a continuation of that one drabble I had, Camera Shy.

Characters: Maki (CKD) and just a bit of Rini (CF‘s OC)
Prompt: http://eat01234.deviantart.com/art/Mirror-113283556


Maki stepped out of the shower, steam everywhere.  He took a towel and proceeded to dry off, thinking of the recent events that had just taken place.  The events concerning that…


He couldn’t shake it off of his mind.  But then who would after killing a friend and love interest? …  He killed them…

He was haunted by it.  He was haunted by those words.  ‘He killed them.’  That day that Taro attacked him, Maki almost wished that he had been killed himself.  He just didn’t think he could live with it.

Maki wrapped a towel around his waist and turned to the sink, clutching the sides as he looked down…  He couldn’t even bare the sight of himself, in knowing that he was a murderer.  But even so, he looked into the mirror, his eyes becoming wide, fear on his face as he pushed himself back from the image in the mirror.  The image of the girl he envied his friend for having.  The image of the girl he had killed.  Burned and mutilated, bits of her skull and muscle-mass showing, some skin hanging off, and sad, desperate eyes looking at him.

Maki hadn’t realized it yet, but the real torture he would go through by using the camera was about to begin: the haunting of the one’s he had killed.
☆ Rinia_lovesuicide on July 10th, 2009 03:53 am (UTC)
I really, really love this one. Poor Maki. We just do all sorts of mean things to him, don't we?

There's just one teensy little thing I see wrong with it, though.

He couldn’t even bare the sight of himself,

"Bare" should be "bear." :P Sorry that I got nitpicky, but I couldn't help but point it out...

I still love you though! X3 This drabble was awesome!
Jazz Baileyjazzbailey on July 10th, 2009 04:05 am (UTC)
Haha! I do things like that a lot! XD

In math, even! I get the tendency to replace the '9's with 'n's! XDDD

Yesh, we so mean to him! But it's fun! XD And I'm glad you liked the drabble! That makes me happy-much! X3
☆ Rinia_lovesuicide on July 10th, 2009 04:24 am (UTC)
I do it too. XD In my most recent drabble I wrote for you, I put "they're" in a place where it should say "their." It irks me when I do that. XD
Jazz Baileyjazzbailey on July 10th, 2009 04:32 am (UTC)
A common problem, I'd reckon! XD Mine's getting worse, though! I'll write one word and end up typing a totally unrelated word in it's place. (Like how, while writing this drabble, I caught myself writing 'about' in the place of 'thinking' >.>;;; ). My reading's getting worse to. I've started mixing lines as I read! XO